Wilson, I took the liberty to do an edit on your article.
Please find below:-
White Cloud Mountain Minnows
Common name: White cloud mountain minnow, poor mans neon, meteor minnow
Scientific/Latin name: Tanichthys albonubes
Maximum length: 3.5 to 4.5 centimetres
Colours: brown, green, yellow, red, neon blue, and black
Temperature preference: 5-30 deg C
pH preference: 6 to 7
Hardness preference: Soft
Salinity preference: Low to 1 Tablespoon per 10 to 30 gallons
Compatibility: Excellent with each other and all other species that I have kept.
Life span: 3 to 10 years
Ease of keeping: Easy
White Cloud Mountain Minnows are small, hearty fish found in the Mountain streams of China. These fish are active, healthy, and cheap. They can be a variety of colour tones, but all have a characteristic horizontal line on their bodies, and are usually less than 1.5". Males are generally more colourful than the females.
White Clouds are ideal for nearly any level of aquarist. They can survive very well in nearly any freshwater tank set-up, and can even do well in a wide range of temperatures ranging from 5-30.C. They also do well with virtually all other fish, because they are very peaceful. The only exception to this would be larger fish that may eat them. Also if kept out of a shoal they have been known to attack more colour full fish e.g. guppies
Mountain Minnows will eat virtually anything you give them. A steady diet of flakes with the occasional veggie matter or live food treat is a great diet for these hardy fish. Because of this omnivorous nature, White Clouds are definitely not a pain to feed, and will not empty your wallet.
For all fish breeders, beginner and experienced, White Clouds are a dream. They must be one of the easiest, if not the easiest, to successfully spawn. All they really need is a good plant, such as Java Moss or others, to lay their eggs in, and those are almost ideal conditions. White Clouds will spawn in nearly any tank, even community tanks. The eggs will hatch in around 48 hours, and after that, the fry will wriggle around for a few days before going to find food. A well-planted tank will be perfect for the fry to find micro-food. E.g. infusoria.
There is also a long-finned variety of White Cloud Mountain Minnows called "Meteor Minnow" or "Red Rocket Minnow". These fish are more colourful than the regulars, but are extremely rare to find in shops if at all in NZ. These fish are also extremely hardy, and are just as active. This special breed is very fun to have, and is probably one of the coolest Cyprinids. Since White Cloud Mountain Minnows are small, hearty, and active; are so beautiful, easy to spawn, and are most of all extremely peaceful and cheap. Will eat mostly anything, and are so easy to keep alive, they are a must for the beginner, and also make a great addition to an experienced aquarists tank
please tell me if it has any spelling errors
it shouldn’t be two bad I’ve taken all day to write it. (The two that you have in this line should be too)
I don't say it is perfect tho, just a tad better.
Al