siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Hey there i just wanted to let people know that my partner has now started up her own small business selling tropical fish cold water fish and axolotls plus a lot of second hand equipment. if your interested in pricing or buying and fish we are still getting stuff on the products page but cause its not there doesnt mean she cant supply it here is the website and just visit it and use the contact page to email with queries. http://www.liquidpets.co.nz '> http://www.liquidpets.co.nz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrahamC Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Good luck. You might want to get someone to spell and grammar check your site for you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Good luck. You might want to get someone to spell and grammar check your site for you. aint find a spelling mistake on my post yet enlighten me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirt Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 I've found a few on the front page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zev Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 I think he is referring to the typo in your site banner... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrahamC Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Yep as well as others, and these betta spleanens (siemese fighters) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 i didnt type out anything on the page... thought you were referring to my post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 right im gonna fix any issues you guys point out on the site as you post them so keep them coming any typos and i will correct them as i am given them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceecee93 Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 i wrote the home page and the laptop i was using has some keys that stick thanks for the point outs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueether Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 If you are going to use a template from the web, make sure that your banner fits in well. ATM it looks very disjointed Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 If you are going to use a template from the web, make sure that your banner fits in well. ATM it looks very disjointed Banner is temp on the page at the mo a new one is being made Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueether Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Banner is temp on the page at the mo a new one is being made K also check the licence, you may have to display the authers copyright notice as well as yours Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ceecee93 Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 a new banner is in progress of being made Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 a new banner is in progress of being made The whole site was stripped of pretty much all its starting code and been redone ....we have someone working on the site at the same time and it will be using CMS soon so im doubting with all the changes we will have to display another copyright notice but will look into it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrahamC Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 It seems a lot of LFS sites use very similar software ... so something new is good. siemese fighters => Siamese Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrahamC Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 And on this page http://www.liquidpets.co.nz/About-us/ you have several grammatical errors and typos. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adrienne Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 There are four errors on the first page of your website and at least one on every other page. As a person who knows the importance of first impressions I would recommend that you fix them promptly. Attention to detail is important and it is a cut throat world out there. I am quite certain you must have access to a spell check and everything you post should be proof read by yourself and at least one other person. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bdspider Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Did you take the photos yourselves or did you find them online? Cos it's not really ok to steal other people's photos without asking/crediting, especially for commercial purposes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueether Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 angle: found on net Betta Splendens: found on net Swordtails: found on net I wont keep looking to see if the others are 'borrowed' as well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrahamC Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Some images can be found in the public domain if one needs them ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bdspider Posted January 26, 2012 Report Share Posted January 26, 2012 Some images can be found in the public domain if one needs them ... Though they still need to be credited generally. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siftyzod Posted January 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2012 Hey and thanks for the input . we are still devoloping the site and my partner wrote up all the pages we are spell checking the site as we redevolop each page i am error and spell checking each one... as for the photos we are not "selling" the photos and a few of them are our own tanks and within the week all the fish photos will be of our own fish... please keep the input coming as we cannot get a good site if we dont get the input and the input is helping to devolop a better site ...no offense will be taken to critism that is productive Glenn Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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